[First Draft]
I have two different narratives that I had in my mind, considering which one I should go for. I asked the audience surround me, and let them choose which narrative is more captivating. The result of this is included in my film pitch. These are the narratives:
This is the result after I asked the potential audience close by:
Most of the potential audience surround me tend to choose the first synopsis plot to be as my film production’s trailer.
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